Hi, I'm a staff critic.
Comments:
You're application, was a little weird reading it. I'm not too sure why. It felt blank and needs more detail, hopefully if you apply again it will be better than you're last two!
I'm sorry, 3/10
Suggestions:
Try enlighten the spirit of you're post, it seems very depressing, try 'fatten' it up a little!
Make it detailed as much as possible, and try not to be so confident. I'm sorry, I thought you we're a little confident with 'everyone loves me.'... Some people have no idea who you are. Lol(:
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